?inundated

inundated發(fā)音

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inundated中文意思翻譯

動(dòng)詞inundate的過去式和過去分詞形式

n. 洪泛的

inundated詞形變化

動(dòng)詞過去分詞: inundated | 動(dòng)詞過去式: inundated | 動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù): inundates | 動(dòng)詞現(xiàn)在分詞: inundating | 形容詞: inundatory | 名詞: inundation |

inundated常見例句

1 、The typhoon inundated 56,460 hectares of crops, destroyed 3,200 houses and cut off road traffic and power supply in some regions, affecting 1.57 million people.───臺(tái)風(fēng)帶來的降水淹沒了56，460公頃農(nóng)作物，切斷的某些地區(qū)的道路交通和電力供應(yīng)，嚴(yán)重影響了1，570，000人的生活。

2 、The fields were inundated with the heavy rain.───大雨淹沒了這一片田地。

3 、While state-owned enterprises have been inundated with loans from the state banks, economists worry too that China's vibrant private sector has been largely left to fend for itself.───在國(guó)有企業(yè)被來自國(guó)有銀行的貸款淹沒的同時(shí)，經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)家還擔(dān)心，中國(guó)富有活力的私營(yíng)部門卻基本上要自謀生路。

4 、There I was inundated with a mass of symbolism.───我被大量的象征符號(hào)所包圍。

5 、Agricultural land has been inundated.───農(nóng)田已被水淹。

6 、And all that water started to inundate the continental shelf and start to flood this vast, flat landscape.─── 融化的冰水開始淹沒大陸架 淹沒了這片開闊平坦的土地

7 、I'm just saying that I think the market is inundated with that kind of food.─── 我只是說 我覺得市場(chǎng)當(dāng)中 這種食物已經(jīng)泛濫了

8 、The university admissions office was inundated with applications and supporting documents.───大學(xué)招生辦公室被申請(qǐng)材料淹沒了。

9 、" When Marius re-entered the redoubt with Gavroche in his arms,his face, like the child, was inundated with blood.───當(dāng)馬呂斯抱著伽弗洛什走進(jìn)棱堡時(shí)，他象那孩子一樣，臉上也是鮮血淋淋。

10 、When experiences has inundated the life criterion, does not know should how the annotation life meaning.───當(dāng)經(jīng)歷漫過生命的尺度時(shí)，不知道該怎樣詮釋生命的含義。

11 、New York City's subway system came to a screeching halt as the subway stations were inundated with water.───因?yàn)榈罔F站被雨水淹沒，地鐵系統(tǒng)隨著列車的一聲緊急剎車而被迫中斷。

12 、It went undiscussed，but they each knew the other was touched by a profound fear of the uncanny．And there was no city presently more inundated in unholy matters than Primordium．Rumour was rife here;───對(duì)于城中近期接連發(fā)生的詭異事件，雖然嘴上誰也不說，三位將軍卻都意識(shí)到了各自心中的恐懼，大家心照不宣地保持著沉默的姿態(tài)。

13 、Bordering the Mediterranean, Beirut will be inundated during the tidal sloshing that occurs during the hour of the shift.───因?yàn)槲挥诘刂泻I，貝魯特將會(huì)在轉(zhuǎn)換的那一個(gè)小時(shí)被晃動(dòng)的海潮淹沒。

14 、As I walked down a crowded aisle, I was inundated with sellers grabbing and clutching me, while pushing their goods under my nose.───我在擁擠的人群里一路向前，不時(shí)被小販們抓住，把他們的產(chǎn)品塞到我鼻子底下。

15 、In case you haven't noticed, our popular culture is quite inundated with zombies.─── 如果你沒注意到 我們的流行文化中可是充滿了各種僵尸元素

16 、Introduction: Tsunami that inundated city, you have to drive to remove all ships oncoming vehicle, signage, Dashi, etc. Key operations, space launches bond───發(fā)生海嘯,城市淹沒,你要駕駛海船清理所有迎面而來的車輛,路標(biāo),大石等等方向鍵操作,空格鍵發(fā)射

17 、Diagnosed with cancer in 2003, King was inundated with goodwill gift food baskets from her friends.───2003年，她被診斷得了癌癥，朋友們紛紛給她送來一籃一籃的慰問食品。

18 、Golden and other Republicans said angry constituents had inundated them with phone calls.───他和其他共和黨人說他們接到了來自憤怒選民的雪片般的**。

19 、Farm-fields, in particular, were so inundated with salt water that salinization of cultivated land became a huge problem.───因?yàn)榇罅葵}水流入稻田，而有鹽化情形，造成很大的問題。

20 、In the past, the cotton fields of Louisiana were inundated annually by the Mississippi River .───在過去的日子里，每年密西西比河都要把路意斯安那州的棉花田淹沉。

21 、The world was inundated with death, at the moment I left her.───在我離開的那刻，世界是死的。

22 、At this moment, our invocations of the Violet Flame have Succeeded to the point that every inner or surface earth nook or cranny, basement or closet is now inundated with the Violet Flame.───在這個(gè)時(shí)刻，我們的祈禱強(qiáng)烈的光芒已經(jīng)成功到達(dá)這點(diǎn)，每個(gè)內(nèi)在或者地球表面，角落或者裂縫，地下室或者密室，現(xiàn)在是充滿了強(qiáng)烈的光芒。

23 、Otherwise I'll be inundating you with questions and everything will get cold.─── 否則我會(huì)問你一堆問題 東西就都放涼了

24 、Keywords Underground water level;Inundated time;Grass in herb layer;Oncomelania hupensis;───地下水位;地表淹水時(shí)間;林下植物;釘螺;

25 、The Policy of Long-term Compensation for the Inundated Land in Guangxi and Its Practice───廣西實(shí)施淹沒土地長(zhǎng)期補(bǔ)償政策的理論與實(shí)踐

26 、Keywords Three Gorges Reservoir;inundated area;soil;heavy metal;───三峽庫區(qū);淹沒區(qū);土壤;重金屬;

27 、Once more and more customers knew me, I'd get inundated with phone call after phone call during lunch and soon I didn't have ANY time during the day to myself.───當(dāng)越來越多的客戶認(rèn)識(shí)我之后，我的午餐時(shí)間被一個(gè)接一個(gè)的**打斷，我也不再有我自己的時(shí)間。

28 、When the big river burst its banks, the fields were inundated.───大河決堤時(shí),田野被洪水淹沒。

29 、We have been inundated with every bit of information imaginable.───凡是想得到的各種各樣的信息潮水般地向我們涌來。

30 、Kong said he was inundated with sales pitches for new beverages and appeared to be in no mood for Mr.Margulies’s spiel.───孔先生說，一開始，各種新出飲料的推銷泛濫，他實(shí)在沒有心情聽馬古利斯先生的推銷。

31 、Microsoft chairman Bill Gates is inundated with up to four million e-mails a day - most of them junk.───微軟總裁比爾·蓋茨現(xiàn)在每天都被淹沒在多達(dá)四百萬封電子郵件中，其中絕大多數(shù)都是垃圾郵件。

32 、The Salton Sea was created in 1905, when a canal breach inundated part of the Mojave desert.───當(dāng)運(yùn)河突破口淹沒了一部分的莫哈韋沙漠時(shí)，索爾頓湖便于1905年形成了。

33 、I'd wake up to the *ell of pancakes and bacon inundating the apartment.─── 我醒來就會(huì)聞到煎餅和培根的香氣 彌漫在房間里

34 、Melbourne soon got over these hiccups and with the discovery of gold in 1851 at Batman was inundated by fortune-seekers from Europe, California and China.───不久，墨爾本克服了這些阻扼。 1851年，由于在巴勒拉特發(fā)現(xiàn)了金礦，墨爾本充斥了從歐洲、加利福尼亞和中國(guó)蜂涌而來的淘金者。

35 、The club has been inundated with offers from all over Europe for {8} but as per his own request {0} will only be selling him to another top flight club within the country.───俱樂部有被提議淹沒從在全歐洲為{8}除了依照之外他自己的請(qǐng)求{0}只將會(huì)是銷售他到另外的頂端飛行俱樂部在國(guó)家里面。

36 、Implementation and concept of planning of re-construction of inundated port at reservoir area───庫區(qū)港口淹沒復(fù)建規(guī)劃的實(shí)踐與構(gòu)想

37 、The sea is flooding in, inundating people's homes down here.─── 海水不斷的涌入 淹沒著人們的家園

38 、The incised alley was gradually inundated when sea-level rose during the postglacial period and a huge estuary was formed.───冰后期海平面上升，下切河谷被淹，并轉(zhuǎn)化為河口灣，海水隨之?dāng)U展到兩側(cè)的古河間地。

39 、We have been inundated with offers of help.───主動(dòng)援助多得使我們應(yīng)接不暇。

40 、Crop polyshaped characters and its specialities of inundated areas in Three Gorges Reservoir───三峽水庫淹沒區(qū)作物多樣性及其特點(diǎn)

41 、Spawning sites are found in inundated forests (Ref. 33813).───產(chǎn)卵區(qū)被發(fā)現(xiàn)于浸水的森林。

42 、A great mass of water inundated /over-whelmed the village.───大水淹沒了這個(gè)村莊。

43 、And again we are inundated with trivia that upends our usual assumptions about the world we think we know.───當(dāng)他沒有想出真正殘忍的手段--比如將獵物鎖進(jìn)箱子然后緩慢地往里注水，就決不動(dòng)手折磨。

44 、A huge avalanche Saturday inundated US Route 40 west of Denver.───一場(chǎng)巨大雪崩淹沒了丹佛西面的40號(hào)公路路段。

45 、He was inundated with/overwhelmed by endless telephone calls.───他被沒完沒了的**淹沒了。

46 、a desk flooded with applications; felt inundated with work; too much overcome to notice; a man engulfed by fear; swamped by work.───充斥著應(yīng)用軟件的桌面；覺得被工作淹沒了；被淹沒而難以注意的；被恐懼淹沒了的男人；被工作淹沒了。

47 、Ice runs on the Ili River, in Xinjiang in the far west, inundated 23 homes and large areas of pasture and forests over the past week.───在江西省，有550萬人受到冰雹和史上最低氣溫2.6攝氏度的影響，該省往年此時(shí)的正常氣溫為6攝氏度。

48 、Ecuadorian officials say at least 10 people have died and thousands have been left homeless by severe rains and floods that have inundated large portions of the Andean nation.───厄瓜多爾官員說，大雨和洪水淹沒了厄瓜多爾大部分地區(qū)，至少10人喪生，成千上萬人無家可歸。

49 、If we get aware of how the bad habits arouse the inner conflict of our mind, we will make clear that how the past intervenes the present, and we would be not inundated by the past.───當(dāng)我們領(lǐng)悟了習(xí)氣是怎樣在我們的內(nèi)心引起種種沖突，我們就會(huì)明白過去是如何入于當(dāng)下的，因而我們也就不會(huì)再被過去所淹沒。

50 、My life is hardly inundated with *ut these days.─── 這些天我的生活毫無* 干干癟癟

51 、When the Chinese market was inundated with fake and poor-quality commodities, Weizhi' s policy won consumers' confidence and trust.───當(dāng)中國(guó)市場(chǎng)上假冒偽劣產(chǎn)品泛濫的時(shí)候,偉志的做法贏得了消費(fèi)者的信心和信任。

52 、Three Gorges project is completed, the White Crane Ridge will be inundated, the state project in 1993, plans to build its large-scale underwater museum.───三峽工程建成后，白鶴梁將被淹沒，國(guó)家已于1993年立項(xiàng)，擬將其建為大型水下博物館。

53 、Is the night, the heart is undefended, for your avalanche, loves like the tide, has inundated the heart, becomes the tear turbulently, the tear falls for you, whether yours lonely washout?───感謝你在我生命中曾經(jīng)的出現(xiàn)，因?yàn)殄忮四悖业奈淖殖錆M了快樂，邂逅你，我的文字有了幸福的烙印，也因?yàn)殄忮四?，我的文字染上了憂傷。

54 、It seems to be working as curious shoppers inundated stores carrying the lap pillow, poking and pinching at the inviting foam legs.───當(dāng)容器的蓋子卡住時(shí)，可以用這種方法讓蓋子松動(dòng)些。

55 、The ground was inundated with water.───地面被水淹沒。

56 、Guangzhou city would be inundated before 2050? What's the Kyoto Protocol? What's acid rain? Why Guangzhou's weather is often so smoggy? What's the worst pollution you dislike?───2050年廣州會(huì)被淹沒嗎？什么是京都議定書？為什么廣州經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)陰霾天氣？什么是酸雨？你最不喜歡的環(huán)境污染是什么?

57 、On inundated compensation mechanism of high water level operation for Fuchunjiang reservoir───建立富春江庫區(qū)高水位運(yùn)行淹沒補(bǔ)償機(jī)制的探討

58 、About two million years ago, the area was inundated by tides and submerged in epeiric seas. Out of this an ancient delta then gradually emerged───200萬年以前，海潮侵吞，形成淺海區(qū)，以后，逐漸形成古三角洲。

59 、As the storm continues to move through the area, local hospitals are inundated with newborns.─── 當(dāng)暴風(fēng)雨侵略該地區(qū) 當(dāng)?shù)蒯t(yī)院新生兒暴增

60 、a desk flooded with applications; felt inundated with work; too much overcome to notice; a man engulfed by fear; swamped by work───充斥著應(yīng)用軟件的桌面；覺得被工作淹沒了；被淹沒而難以注意的；被恐懼淹沒了的男人；被工作淹沒了

61 、Being inundated with complaints from intimacy to inventory “Listen, McGregor,” the chairman began ominously.───” 被投訴淹沒 “聽著，邁格萊格，”董事長(zhǎng)開始說，語氣中有不吉利的意思。

62 、Poor nomads hunt down the snakes in fields and forests during the monsoon season when they come out in the open after their holes are inundated with rain water.───一些窮苦的牧民會(huì)在雨季期間到田間和森林里去捕蛇，因?yàn)樵谶@個(gè)期間雨水會(huì)淹沒蛇洞，而洞里的蛇就會(huì)紛紛爬到外面來。

63 、Smith returned two days after the National Guard had been there.Floodwater had inundated the house, rising almost to roof level.A dirty brown stain is an indelible reminder of its highest level.───在國(guó)民警衛(wèi)軍的人來到之后史密斯回去過兩天.他看到洪水幾乎淹到了房頂.讓它成為一個(gè)擦不掉的污穢暗黑的污點(diǎn).

64 、It's been inundated with water from a hydroelectric project, or with oil from oil derricks.─── 農(nóng)田因?yàn)榻ㄋ娬径谎蜎] 或是因?yàn)榻ㄓ吞锸艿轿廴?/p>

65 、Cities at sea level, such as Los Angeles, London and Amsterdam would be inundated.───在海平面的城市，像洛杉磯、倫敦和阿姆斯特丹將會(huì)被淹沒。

66 、Modern parents are inundated with information on how to mould their children into responsible adults, capable of navigating the treacherous waters of society.───如何把自己的孩子造就成有責(zé)任感的成年人，使之可以在社會(huì)上經(jīng)受住驚濤駭浪的侵襲，現(xiàn)代父母接觸的這類信息數(shù)不勝數(shù)。

67 、In all, the evidence implies that Amazonia was inundated at least twice when the vast wetland existed, between 16 million and 10 million years ago.───總而言之，這些證據(jù)意味著，1600~1000萬年前那片廣闊濕地存在的時(shí)候，亞馬遜河流域至少已經(jīng)被海水淹沒兩次。

68 、Earlier this year, he said, he was inundated by emails from people who had seen the film’s trailer online, and wanted to know when they could see it in their cinemas.───他說，今年早些時(shí)候，他被在網(wǎng)上看過這部影片的預(yù)告片的人發(fā)來的電子郵件淹沒了，他們都想知道他們什么時(shí)候才能在**院里看到這部作品。

69 、19 The waters completely inundated the earth so that even all the high mountains under the entire sky were covered.───19大水完全浸淹大地,在天底下所有最高的山峰也被大水覆蓋.

70 、Rescue crews are inundated with highpriority targets.─── 高優(yōu)先權(quán)的目標(biāo)已經(jīng)讓救援人員應(yīng)接不暇

71 、Treatment of Reservoir Inundated Farmland at Reach in Plain-Hill Area───平原微丘河段水庫農(nóng)田淹沒處理探討

72 、In the past, the cotton fields of Louisiana were inundated annually by the Mississippi River.───在過去的日子里,每年密西西比河都要把路意斯安那州的棉花田淹沉。

73 、The dazzling sun of June inundated this terrible thing with light. It was the barricade of the Faubourg of the Temple.───六月眩目的陽光籠罩著這怪物。這就是大廟郊區(qū)的街壘。

74 、Purpose In an age inundated in information, serve as a news media in the public interest and in depth reporting, and propagate faith, hope, and love.───成立主旨本會(huì)以高舉基督、傳揚(yáng)福音、造就信徒、服務(wù)教會(huì)為宗旨，發(fā)行基督教論壇報(bào)并推展基督教文字出版工作及其他有關(guān)事項(xiàng)。

75 、A flood inundated the whole area.───一場(chǎng)洪水淹沒了整個(gè)地區(qū)。

76 、When mayor of Lismore was reporting the situation to the spectators on television, flood behind him almost inundated treetops.───利斯摩爾市市長(zhǎng)在向電視觀眾介紹災(zāi)情時(shí)，身后的大水幾乎沒了樹梢。

77 、In all, the evidence implies that Amazonia was inundated at least twice when the vast wetland existed, between16 million and10 million years ago.───總而言之，這些證據(jù)意味著，1600~000萬年前那片廣闊濕地存在的時(shí)候，亞馬遜河流域至少已經(jīng)被海水淹沒兩次。

78 、The company office was inundated with telegrams of congratulations on the tenth anniversary of its foundation.───公司成立十周年紀(jì)念時(shí)賀電潮水般地涌到公司辦公處來。

79 、By analyzing the environmental status of Yanbian County, which inundated by Ertan Hydropower Station, this paper brings forward the importance of environmntal function recovery of resettlement county.───以四川省二灘水電站淹沒影響的鹽邊縣城遷建前后環(huán)境狀況變化為例,提出水庫移民安置中應(yīng)重視淹沒實(shí)物環(huán)境功能的恢復(fù)。

80 、The theater was inundated with requests for tickets.───劇場(chǎng)為索票的聲勢(shì)所壓倒

81 、The publisher was inundated with orders.───出版社接到雪片般飛來的訂單。

82 、the main deck was afloat (or awash); the monsoon left the whole place awash; a flooded bathroom; inundated farmlands; an overflowing tub.───主甲板被淹沒了；雨季讓整個(gè)地方都被水淹沒；被水淹了的浴室；被淹沒的農(nóng)田；水都溢出來了的浴缸。

83 、Coldness, dread, worrying my thesis, all inundated me, making my whole body scrunch more and more closely, then finally became a reverse big question mark.───冷漠，恐懼，擔(dān)心著我的論文，我被它淹沒了，使我全身碾碎，然后變成了大問號(hào)。

84 、Personalized decoration are inundated by the tide.───個(gè)性化裝修不易被潮流淹沒。

85 、Britain because of the financial markets have been inundated with large numbers of the money lenders appear to you to carry out personal attacks on loan at a very competitive rate.───因?yàn)橛?guó)金融市場(chǎng)已經(jīng)淹沒以放債人的大數(shù)出現(xiàn)您能進(jìn)行人身攻擊貸款以非常競(jìng)爭(zhēng)率。

86 、The office was inundated with complaints about the washing machines.───辦公室到處是對(duì)洗衣機(jī)的抱怨聲。

87 、The landslide that inundated the Naches River last month created a barrier of millions of cubic yards of silt, mud and rock that slowed _ and likely confused _ spawning salmon and hungry trout.───上個(gè)月掩埋了納奇斯河的山崩，制造了數(shù)以百萬立方碼計(jì)的污泥、泥漿，和巖石屏障，讓產(chǎn)卵的鮭魚和饑餓的鱒魚游速減緩，而且可能為之困惑。

88 、Discussion on Reconstruction of Inundated Ports at Reservoir Basins───庫區(qū)港口淹沒復(fù)建問題的商榷

89 、a place inundated with visitors───參觀者絡(luò)繹不絕的地方

90 、Gotal is born with its cone sensors intact, causing pain and confusion in babies for their first year as they are inundated with sensory information.───剛出生時(shí)，戈塔爾人的錐角感受器處于原初狀態(tài)，當(dāng)它們?cè)谧畛鯉啄昀镏饾u充滿感覺信息時(shí)，嬰兒會(huì)感到痛苦與混亂。

幫忙批改一下雅思大作文~~~~~~~

思路不錯(cuò)，但是時(shí)態(tài)和語法錯(cuò)誤多了點(diǎn)。

幫忙批改一下雅思大作文~~~~~~~

此篇作文的topic是談?wù)摤F(xiàn)代科學(xué)技術(shù)對(duì)生活的影響,并要求給出自己的觀點(diǎn).

一.

1.第一段,呼應(yīng)題目,按正反兩方面論證,并在最后給出自己的觀點(diǎn),很好!

通篇的思路也不錯(cuò),雖然不新穎,但是穩(wěn)就是高分的基礎(chǔ)!

文章拋開語法錯(cuò)誤(明顯的會(huì)在最后指明)之外,最大的不足就是對(duì)于分論點(diǎn)的闡述,分析和舉例的非常泛泛,像蜻蜓點(diǎn)水一樣,只觸及皮毛而不深入,沒有切中要害.

2.論點(diǎn)--分論點(diǎn)的關(guān)系,最好邏輯清晰明確,而且談?wù)摰闹黝}最好是社會(huì)常見的現(xiàn)象.在你的第二段里,有2個(gè)分論點(diǎn),第1點(diǎn)是運(yùn)輸系統(tǒng),可選擇的交通工具多種多樣,給人們出行帶來便利; --這里分論點(diǎn)是transportation network,而舉例卻是many kinds of vehicle,交通網(wǎng)絡(luò)和交通工具雖然有關(guān)聯(lián),但是含義還是有不小的分歧.而且transportation network這個(gè)詞,英文的用法里是沒有的,這里算是一個(gè)中式英語的運(yùn)用..是大忌! 去掉network就好,transportation 一詞已經(jīng)足夠表達(dá)運(yùn)輸體系的含義了,而且跟下面的vehicle關(guān)系更近,更理解的通順.

第2點(diǎn),現(xiàn)代發(fā)明使地域相隔的人們,交流卻變得方便,拉近人們的距離.--這里最好不要用手機(jī)來距離,用網(wǎng)絡(luò)更貼切!因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)絡(luò)能提供除了語音外更多的服務(wù)!

另外,這里的句法你用的是:因?yàn)閕f you want to...and then you buy a phone,這樣的表達(dá)在中文里也是有問題的,我們表達(dá)起來要更通順,更符合英語的習(xí)慣: you just buy a phone and then you can...也更能體現(xiàn)現(xiàn)代科技的作用! 否則你想要跟XX聯(lián)系,你完全可以不去買手機(jī),寫信也可以的啊.

這種語言表述的問題,需要平日里多注意,多閱讀純種的英文文章,細(xì)心體會(huì)老外的表達(dá)方式,一定不要把中文強(qiáng)行翻譯過來,閱卷人都是鬼子,他們會(huì)費(fèi)解的.

3.第三段,闡述反面的因素.這里的論點(diǎn)和論據(jù),我提點(diǎn)建議給你,現(xiàn)代化工具的作用依靠的是能源的消耗,在談反面因素的時(shí)候,最好結(jié)合能源,結(jié)合全球的狀況來說,(除了電,類似的還有污染,人的妄意破壞,導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果一般都?xì)w到global warming里去),這樣,你的理解和態(tài)度一下會(huì)提升到更高的一個(gè)層次中去,會(huì)更有親和力.

當(dāng)然,你這里談到的也很好,高科技導(dǎo)致人們需要不停的追逐知識(shí)的瘋長(zhǎng),需要不停的提高,無法得到穩(wěn)定的生活,等等,繼續(xù)發(fā)揚(yáng),不過也要多關(guān)心這方面的表述和舉例形式.

平時(shí)多去讀讀好的習(xí)作,主要看范文給出的分論點(diǎn)及其對(duì)論點(diǎn)的舉例說明!

結(jié)束部分,對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)一步的表明.對(duì)正面因素,做的不錯(cuò).

對(duì)反面因素,這里最好給出或者建議人們一種方式方法,避免你在第三段提出的反面原因的發(fā)生,比如說要減少能源消耗,省電省水等等,這樣做能更好的節(jié)省能源,為現(xiàn)代科技的發(fā)展更好的服務(wù)...

--這樣做又能使你的文章再增色一分!

要點(diǎn)就是--對(duì)反面因素,以你個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn),提倡一種合理合適的方法或者注意事項(xiàng)! 大體意思要提到,至于你提出的觀念的對(duì)錯(cuò)嘛,畢竟是你個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn),考官不會(huì)追究的,嘿嘿! 要的只是你關(guān)注全球的意識(shí)!

好了,大體說這么多吧,記得練習(xí)作文,在要求得分小于等于7分的情況下,多學(xué)習(xí)他人的論點(diǎn)和舉例內(nèi)容,足以!

二.對(duì)部分語法的指正:

1.The obvious advantages of modern-day technologies are many.

--明顯的頭重腳輕式! 這種情況用什么句型? 用There be啊!

There are many advantages for using modern-day technologies.

2.For example, if you is planning a trip, there are so many kinds of vehicle for your choice, even it is spaceplane.

--you are, I am, he/she is, 這種低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤一定不能犯!

--even spaceplane,使句子讀起來更通順,在保持語句流暢時(shí),能不用it is,that等連接詞的時(shí)候就不要用.

3.For instance, if you want to talk with your family or some friends at all times and all places,

-- all times and all places 任何時(shí)間任何地點(diǎn)吧? 不要這樣表達(dá)喔,會(huì)被扣分的! 具體表述我不大清楚了,自己搜索下吧,或者留心別人是怎樣處理的.

4.We are inundated with a great variety of high-tech product in this modern world.

--inundated with,是想表達(dá)什么?淹沒在科技的海洋? 還不如用surround by來的清楚明確呢(雖然這也不是好的表述,但是起碼能讓老外清楚的理解你的意思!),一定要注意,去除中式的表達(dá)!中文的一個(gè)意思,不一定就非得對(duì)應(yīng)英文的一個(gè)單詞,要換個(gè)角度想想,能表達(dá)清楚足以,不要胡亂用生僻詞,鬼子也不是所有英文詞都認(rèn)得的!

5.A lot of general knowledge and skills of people are fading.

--同樣的頭重腳輕,這樣的句子只能出現(xiàn)在腦海的構(gòu)想中,想到的同時(shí)就要將語序轉(zhuǎn)變過來, people are fading a lot of...

6.Even some people state that,

--state是個(gè)很正式的詞語,用于發(fā)表一些正規(guī)的規(guī)章制度等,普通民眾就不要說了...注意記住一些常用表示"表達(dá),發(fā)表,闡述,說明"等的英文單詞.

7.Whatever,--最后一段開頭

--這個(gè)詞語一定不要在作文中出現(xiàn)! 這是口語詞匯,而且?guī)в幸环N玩世不恭,無所謂的態(tài)度,可不是應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)在筆頭作文中的喲.